As wonderful as words are, we have to admit they have limits. However, they can be especially powerful when used in combination with the senses.

How much more effective is a whispered “I love you,” when punctuated by kisses. How well an “I’m sorry for your loss,” goes with a touch of the hand; “Do you remember…” goes with a specific scent or melody from the past.

When editing your story, check to see that you have deepened point of view by including, amongst your dialogue, all the senses.